Friday, March 9, 2007

Shadows of New Orleans

The Apartments stand.

Broken windows, shattered lives.

Everywhere, shadows.

2 comments:

scash said...

deep haiku

Anonymous said...

Right back atcha, Lane:

some whispered truth stains
ghoulish imprints on my dreams
i awake, still here

My first night in New Orleans, I stay with my friend who lives in Midcity. Across the street from her, a house skeleton stands, its guts neatly piled in the yard. A FEMA trailer sits on the corner, small and foreign. The weekend before I arrive, the crackhouse two doors down burned to the ground, lighting up the whole street and waking my friend up in the middle of the night. "It's amazing how loud a fire can be," she tells me.

My friend and I drive to a coffee shop within walking distance of her house. She says it depresses her to walk around her neighborhood. I have a nightmare the first night, not sure what about. This haiku comes outta that first night, when I sleep, uneasily awaiting what new skeletons I'll see tomorrow.